The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/17
Wow! Divine intervention, that happened to me and my hubby many years ago on the road. Amazing when we feel the presence of God so strongly, and a witness to His saving grace...thanks for sharing. I'm so happy you're all okay. Praise God.

Blessings~
I have thought about it several times but we usually don't know the times we have been "saved" from an accident by God's providence. Thank you God.

Nicely written.
Great story. I love hearing stories of divine intervention. There are times I know God has intervened for me, but I also wonder how many times He's done it that I wasn't aware. You did a great job with the topic and I was engaged from the beginning. Thank you for sharing.
Congratulations, Tanika, on your 9th place EC for this miraculous story.
04/27/17
Thank you to all who have provided feedback and well wishes! I appreciate it.
God bless!
Tanika Feaster
04/27/17
Congratulations on your 1st place finish in the Beginners category and 9th place overall, Tanika. The Lord works in mysterious ways, and I am so glad He looks out for us.

You are a talented storyteller, and I look for you to rise through the ranks quickly.
06/10/17
Hello Tanika,
Thank you for this article. This was a good article on how the Lord takes care of us. I pray that the Lord will continue to bless your writing. God is always in control! Even steering wheels. He is the Pilot!

Wanda Carr
06/27/17
Congratulations, Tanika. A lovely testimony and well deserved placing. Every blessing.
06/27/17
Congratulations, Tanika. A lovely testimony and well deserved placing. Every blessing.
Very good recounting of a miraculous event. Miraculous actually means wonderful happening. I had no doubt this was real and affected you deeply.

We are missing a few commas around clauses. Your second sentence isn't. I would tie it to the one before with appositive form.
Hi Tanika,

I just noticed your entry. It's no surprise as to why you won this round. Congratulations!!
Please, please don't ever stop writing. You have the talent for bigger things ... I feel it. What a wonderful, faith-inspiring story.

Best wishes,
Josephine