The Official Writing Challenge
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What a beautiful story. I was really captivated
I really enjoyed this. It kept my attention all the way through. A very touching piece that abused women need to read and also those of us who say we are born again. This is an example of what we are called to be to those who are in darkness. Captured this very well. Continue on
02/14/05
The first paragraph could be reworked to better hook th4e reader. The story, though, was powerful and well written.It also fit the theme
I agree the first paragrah which is always has to grab and hold us could be reworded a little. BUT the heart of the story told was there, letting us feel her fear and make us wonder how many cries have we ignored?
02/17/05
this is an area of much needed ministry