The Official Writing Challenge
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You sure captured my attention. My mind kept trying to figure out what these places were..I have been left hanging in the "why", and the "where".
Quite unusual but I enjoyed it.
I think I understand what the place was? Were you talking about the prison we are in before we come to follow Jesus and how painful the experience can be of leaving the old man behind and ending up in the Christian liberty to which Paul alludes? Very original! Leaves lots of room for meditation. Thanks for sharing.
I'm thinking that this is depicting the birth process, but I could be way off. Hope you'll tell us, now that judging is over!
I also thought of birth process until the last line or so; then realized it had to be something else. Very Interesting...but still stymied and puzzled. It was unique, but I kept reading - which means you kept the readers interest to the end. Thank you for sharing.