The Official Writing Challenge
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What a great lesson in this story. At first I wanted to shake the main character and slowly we are lead to her eyes opening and making us all a little humble as we read the gift of the family.
02/16/05
What a great story!
02/17/05
excellent conclusion through your tender story.
02/18/05
I loved the way your story kept me interested and involved throughout.

It also made me think of how we often don't recognize the hospitality of others as a gift to us.

Well written!
02/20/05
This is a winner. It is good to be exposed to other parts of the world while one is young. I've been blessed to go overseas, and the hospitality i've encountered has been great, especially when i consider how my hosts had so little materially.
02/25/05
Amber, this is a well-written and beautiful story. It is a winner in my book. Keep growing in Jesus!