The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/06
I liked this! The comparison to the geese was great! It flowed well and I liked how it read. And as one living with all those snowbirds down here..we are happy a few choose to stay in cold NY!:))
Great anaolgy and lots of life experience to go with it. Good conclusion!
The Lord has His ways to remind us of the blessings already in our lives. Some of the sentance structure could be sharpene a little - look at the 3rd sentance of the first paragraph for example: do snowbirds drive cars? Otherwise this is very nice and some lovely observations. God bless.