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01/09/06
I love this! It's what every parent goes through at some point, yet the love they have for their child quickly replaces their negative feelings. Beautiful!
01/11/06
Creatively done! Very good. I only noticed that of should be 'off'. A story that many of us can relate to.
As a mother of five, I can definitely relate to this! The noise, the mess, the frustration, and the work - wouldn't it be good if it would just all go away? And then they do something and our heart lurches and we realise again why we enjoy being a mum. Well done. I'd like to encourage you to expand on this and submit it to a parenting magazine. I'm sure others will enjoy it as much as I have. Blessings, Jules.