The Official Writing Challenge
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01/09/06
I love the poem, which could easily stand alone. Beautiful.
01/11/06
I agree about the poem. Great! Some of the wording of your sentences were close to being run ons or unclear. The sentence 'drawn into the drama I.." could be broken into two. I liked your style and I liked what you were saying. You write well except for some sentence structure needs. :)