The Official Writing Challenge
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Cool take on a familiar story! I've never read this story from a different perspective.
01/10/06
Great choice of perpective and setting! Cultural overtones add authenticity as well. Be careful of person-changes and paragraph breaks. Good job!
This was very well done - an often unheard voice is given life here with authenticity and humanity. The writing flowed very well within a very well constructed frame and it evokes genuine sympathy. Very well done, and I thought the title was excellent and woven into the story very intelligantly. One of my favourites in this section.