The Official Writing Challenge
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01/13/06
Cleverly done the way you told the Exodus in poetic form. At times you used poetic licence in your use of tense, but a brilliant poem nevertheless.
01/14/06
you did an incredible job on this!
I was thinking your piece would be one of those old, dry boring poems but I was suprised at the nowness of your diction. Good flow