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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Escape (01/02/06)

TITLE: WHEN IT'S TIME!
By Deena Walls
01/02/06


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The mirror image that rambles through my mind when I think of how it will be, radiates light, grace, peace, and truth through dimensions I cannot even fathom. A practicality of simplicity yet so complex.

Oh the beauty of the place we long for, the rest in which will capture our time, a grand concerto bringing together so perfectly every note as a heavenly melody flows through our minds.The hope we grasp onto will soon be finalized.

A treasure of welcome mats and a parade to exclaim" You made it oh daughter the race it is through! " Yes I do believe the image we have, so dull in comparison will be made bold, grand; a radiant kaleidoscope of Gods salvation at hand!

An escape to the heavens accompanied by the king and as the trumpet blows we will be new in Him!

So sit back and wonder, create in your mind the most amazing escape and it will only be better when its time!


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Julia May01/09/06
Julia May01/09/06
This is awesome and it does make the imagination soar. Lovely wording...
Andria Cook01/11/06
I think this would make a lovely poem. Good wording, you captured some beautiful descriptions
Marilyn Schnepp 01/12/06
You have made me homesick for heaven. Lovely, descriptive piece. Very nice.
Linda Germain 01/15/06
Very nice. :0)