The Official Writing Challenge
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I agree! We all must reach the place where we are able, in our hearts, to accept Jesus Christ.

Well-written story!
Nice re-telling of a familiar story.

Consider using a few different words or phrases to replace "Zacchaeus," who shows up in almost every sentence. "The tax collector", "the small man," even a few more uses of "he".

Thanks for expounding on this passage, and for your message of hope.