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I loved reading this entry. Hope this was a true story. God chooses events to happen in our lives when we least expect it
This was just lovely; I do hope its a true story. Beautifully and gently written. Having read your title I just had to read - just last Friday we had a rare family outing together ... to Warwick Castle, even going on to Stratford on Avon about 3 in the afternoon!! Its as beautiful as ever! Thankyou for this.
08/14/15
I loved the wonder and romance at Warwick Castle.

Red Ink: The last two sentences in the sixth paragraph should be joined together, with a comma before so.
08/19/15
Loved the interspersing of romance and tourist. Spelling or typo - should be extrovert. In last para., watch should be in the past tense.
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