The Official Writing Challenge
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12/13/05
Beautifully written. The title is perfect. One tiny correction: used-to-be instead of use-to-be. The visual of gnarled roots is perfect. Good job!
12/13/05
Good reminder of the worth of the elders among us and their strengths. Lots fo thoughts packed into a small piece.
Good comparison of older trees & the connection with older people & their acquired wisdom.

One suggestion---separate paragraphs as it's easier to read.
12/17/05
I love this..beautifully written. Space between paragraphs make easier reading. This was lovely. God bless ya, littlelight