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Such a cute story. Made me smile. I first heard sbout the jackalope in South Dakota...so gullible...saw that they were "real" at Wall Drug. Very good story telling...I really enjoyed it!
This is a sweet story. I really enjoyed Mike's sense of humor. I tend to do similar things.

I noticed you had a couple of incomplete sentences. This one is lacking a subject: Always on his side of the road, of course.
You could fix it like this: Of course the mutilated mess was always on his side of the road.

You did a nice job of inserting dialog to move the story along. I think you covered the topic in a fun way and I bet your family will treasure this story for years.

07/09/15
Ha-ha-ha. I loved this!
Great story and wonderful relationship between you and hubby!

God bless~
This was a hilarious story that fits the topic to a tee. I didn't believe the tale of jackalope until the postcard.
Congratulations! Happy Dance!