The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/05
Nicely done. Insightful without being a browbeater. Good flow. Not sure if it's focus is spring, though.
You have painted an effective and realistic picture of our lives in Christ with this article. Good job!!
12/06/05
Very keen insight! I'm afraid I would identify with Cathy at this time of my life, but also with you. Nicely drawn parallels between a garden and life, the overgrown patches, the weeds, the flowers, and the bare earth. The last paragraph and second paragraph from the end are gems! Thank you for sharing!
12/07/05
I liked how you did the transfer, and your thoughts. I feel like I could relate to the variety. Thank you for your sharing. God bless ya, littlelight
12/07/05
I really liked your article. Inspired and thought provoking.
12/07/05
The "Kathy" and "John" paragraphs were so real and lively, that the "someone else" paragraph is a bit of a letdown. Maybe "someone else could have a name and a story, too?

I like the metaphor that you chose for yourself, though. Very realistic and teachable.
12/11/05
I couldn't believe I was reading in the Beginner's Level - as your writing is excellent; didn't catch any typos, goofs, or misspelled words; no grammar flaws...just perfect. I liked the story, and you did a great job describing your life as a garden. Very well done!
02/06/06
This was truly wonderful, and we had so many thoughts here tied into the one frame. Easy to digest, and read. Very good! God bless you, littlelight