The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice use of fruit, harvest, renewal ideas. Personalized seasons was a good point as well. Not sure about the form, but it seemed to work.
This reads more like prose than poetry; try putting it in paragraphs and see if it flows.

Good thoughts on spring; thanks for writing!
I agree, I think this would be lovely in paragraph form. Nice descriptions. Thank you for sharing. God bless ya, littlelight
The last stanza especially spoke to me, the time of restoring, recognizing if I have left the path. In agreement with Jan and Nina, this seems more like prose than poetry. Keep writing!