The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/05
Nice use of fruit, harvest, renewal ideas. Personalized seasons was a good point as well. Not sure about the form, but it seemed to work.
12/07/05
This reads more like prose than poetry; try putting it in paragraphs and see if it flows.

Good thoughts on spring; thanks for writing!
12/07/05
I agree, I think this would be lovely in paragraph form. Nice descriptions. Thank you for sharing. God bless ya, littlelight
12/08/05
The last stanza especially spoke to me, the time of restoring, recognizing if I have left the path. In agreement with Jan and Nina, this seems more like prose than poetry. Keep writing!