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The little boy Preston wiggled his way into my heart. His father knew the right words to say to the lad to calm his fears.
05/30/15
Your story is right on topic and pulls at my heartstrings.

It is refreshing to read about a father who is willing to wait patiently for his son to overcome his fears and jump into his waiting arms.

Well written.
I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, I think you did a fine job of writing on topic, yet you took it a step farther. Often in life, it's the little ones who God sends to teach us. Though my kids are all adults now, I'm still humbled by their wisdom. They have done so much by following where God leads them. Not only does it touch other hearts, it often makes me realize how blessed I am to have such people in my life. Thank you for sharing. You touched my heart.
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