The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a powerful testimony about how God can restore our lives if we trust and obey Him. I was saddened to hear about the main character losing a friend. I am glad the parents were so loving and kind.
This is a great message. I can totally relate, having experienced some similar situations. I think sometimes God blesses us with faulty memories.
My main red ink would be to condense some of the lines and mix some more action to do more showing. For example:
The stench of disinfectant woke me, and I coughed and sputtered as tears streamed down my face. Grabbing my side with one hand, I tried to stop my head from spinning with the other. Where am I? What did I do? A groan escaped my lips.

This story is perfect with the shape of the world today. I'm sure many can relate in many different ways. You did a great job and held my interest the entire read, The topic is splattered throughout the entire story. You did a nice job with the ending too, leaving the reader with a sense of understanding and warmth.