The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a sweet testimony. It sounds like the perfect school. Be careful about switching to the universal you. By keeping it in the first person, you're not excluding your reader (since I've never been in the school, I don't know what it's like, but when you stay with the first person, you are sharing your experience with me). I think you did a great job of writing on topic. I liked the ending. It left me with a feeling of hope for our future.
05/28/15
Praise the Lord! I've taught in a small Christian school, and I know what you have described. I'm thankful for the small bands of equipped Christian soldiers.