The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/15
I like this. There are some good reminders here.

Don't tell us when you're going to give the point. Let the article and the point stand on its own. You made things clear enough that you really didn't need to point it out to the reader.

I loved the line about how your pottery "remotely resembled a lopsided bowl." I can relate. I joke that when I draw something, if you hold it at arm's length, squint, and use your imagination, then it MIGHT look like what it's supposed to be. :)

05/20/15
Great illustration and point we ALL need to be reminded of. Nicely done.
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