The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a great article. I liked how you showed the contrast of before and after and how quickly the memories started to fade. I also liked that Adam remembered, and used, God's promises. It was greatly imaginative with a lot of meaning.
Great storytelling!
Really good perspective on that "First Night"! Enjoyed reading.
I have never tried to picture that first night after the dreadful fall. You have brought it to life for me. Thanks and well done!
I am so glad that God gives us such vivid imaginations! Great Job!
excellent writing, very should continue this and build a full story through all of their life.
Your word descriptions were great. I felt like I could feel and see your characters. Space between your paragraphs to make it easier to read. Keep up wthe good work. God bless you. fingers got ahead of my brain. I meant to say keep up with the good work. LOL God bless.