The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/05
This was a great article. I liked how you showed the contrast of before and after and how quickly the memories started to fade. I also liked that Adam remembered, and used, God's promises. It was greatly imaginative with a lot of meaning.
01/18/05
Great storytelling!
01/18/05
Really good perspective on that "First Night"! Enjoyed reading.
01/20/05
I have never tried to picture that first night after the dreadful fall. You have brought it to life for me. Thanks and well done!
01/20/05
I am so glad that God gives us such vivid imaginations! Great Job!
01/21/05
excellent writing, very powerful...you should continue this and build a full story through all of their life.
Your word descriptions were great. I felt like I could feel and see your characters. Space between your paragraphs to make it easier to read. Keep up wthe good work. God bless you.
Sorry...my fingers got ahead of my brain. I meant to say keep up with the good work. LOL God bless.