The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/05
Unique perspective on spring. Uplifting yet somber. Meter felt a little uneven in the opening stanza.
12/07/05
I had a hard time floowing this; some of the things that you said spring is not, are things I've always thought spring is.

Nevertheless, you have a gift with words; this poem is very lyrical.
12/08/05
Fascinating rhythm and choice of adjectives. Interesting contrasts between physical manifestations of Spring vs. spiritual.
12/09/05
"Winter's Edge"??...I wondered about this title, and tried to digest the thoughts; however, much of this free verse is over my head; I tend to be rather simplistic (A/K/A "simple-minded"..ahem) in my thinking; thus, something beautiful to others, can easily pass me by. Only one small opinion here, however...so keep up the good work and God Bless.