The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/05
This is like two separate devotionals--I like them both, but they don't seem to relate to each other. I especially would like to see an expanded version of paragraph one, about the first spring. What did Adam and Eve think of it?
12/09/05
Ditto! I wanted to hear more about that First Spring! The two paragraphs had beautiful thoughts...about Spring, but nothing to grab my attention to the point of not letting go until I had read what Adam and Eve Thought. Thank you for sharing and God BLess.
02/26/08
I decided to read another article - you have a great gift for words. You should expand on your thoughts a little more. Great story and keep writing. We need good Christian writers with deep thoughts that can explain the heart of God.