The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/05
Stories about reconciliation always tug at my heart! Good job.

You switched POV a few times, and since we had no names, only the pronouns "he" and "she" for these people, sometimes it was hard to know who was thinking or feeling at the time.

Loved the concept of springtime of the heart.