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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Spring (as in the season) (11/28/05)

TITLE: What happens at spring time?
By karen McLamb
12/01/05


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WOW!
Spring is here again
The March winds come in like a lamb
And go out like a lion.
All the time the seeds have been
Planted

We are waiting to see
How beautiful the flowers are,
Also the trees began to bloom
Smell so good, look so pretty.
You hear the bells ringing
And see the boats sailing,
The kites are flying, so are the birds
The swans and the turtles are out!
The children are playing

All of us have that spring fever,
To get out of are winter clothes
And begin our spring
Wardrobe,
Oh how lovely that isÖ
The smell of the rose garden in the springtime
Like! Tulips, crocus, daffodil, forsythias, witch-hazel
This is spring
Itís a lovely thing
Smelling the clean fresh air
Makes me come alive!
This is spring
Oh Yes it is,
I enjoy every minute of it


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Jan Ackerson 12/07/05
What a happy poem! You did a great job with the mood of this entry.

The word WOW at the beginning is distracting--you gave us "wow-ness" in the poem. Work on punctuation a bit...

I really liked this happy little verse.