The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/05
Very cute!! Some puctuation needs but otherwise well writtten. I did have some trouble deciding who was speaking in the 5th paragraph..you made need to change one word there. Very nice:)Thanks!!
12/05/05
This was very cute! Thanks for sharing!
This is another keeper!! You express your point very well.
12/07/05
I like your use of "defiant" to describe crocuses.

Be careful of punctuation errors. And please let the reader know how old Josie is fairly early in the piece.

A very sweet little slice-of-life.

12/08/05
A neat snapshot into the experiences of children and their "teachable moments".
12/09/05
Very sweet. You captured the little girl's enthusiasm for life very well with her actions.