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As a mother of 5 missionary kids, I can so relate!! Thanks so much for this story. We are just about to move fields, and it's been a real encoruagement to me.
Jenna's feelings and emotions about moving are very well portrayed. Sometimes we don't want to look for a positive. Well Done.
This story would have a lot of appeal for teens. Jenna is portrayed very realistically. Try putting her inner thoughts in italics as a signal to your reader.
Nicely done. All the emotions are easily identifiable (we can relate to them) and the interactions are well written.
We moved our daughter in her junior year so much of this was so realistic. Good characterization. I enjoyed!
And this brought a smile to my face! I can relate to the moving around since growing up in the military. I really enjoyed reading this and you did a great job of conveying the characters and their feelings. Well done.
Hey! You had my attention all the way! Yes, I can relate too. Three kids and we're in the ministry. so realistic for sure!