The Official Writing Challenge
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As a mother of 5 missionary kids, I can so relate!! Thanks so much for this story. We are just about to move fields, and it's been a real encoruagement to me.
12/06/05
Jenna's feelings and emotions about moving are very well portrayed. Sometimes we don't want to look for a positive. Well Done.
12/07/05
This story would have a lot of appeal for teens. Jenna is portrayed very realistically. Try putting her inner thoughts in italics as a signal to your reader.
12/07/05
Nicely done. All the emotions are easily identifiable (we can relate to them) and the interactions are well written.
12/07/05
We moved our daughter in her junior year so much of this was so realistic. Good characterization. I enjoyed!
12/11/05
And this brought a smile to my face! I can relate to the moving around since growing up in the military. I really enjoyed reading this and you did a great job of conveying the characters and their feelings. Well done.
Hey! You had my attention all the way! Yes, I can relate too. Three kids and we're in the ministry. so realistic for sure!