The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/05
How deep have you sunk that you think Godís hands cannot reach you and pull you out?

This sentence alone is a sparkling jewel, in a lovely devotional.
12/06/05
I liked the ending. I felt the beginning was a bit over-explanatory or wordy, but it wrapped up nicely.
Very nice. Be careful with grammar though. Lots of good points you brought up.