The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely! You captured the season..and a beautiful message..well done.
12/07/05
I like the repetition of "spring is...", and you have some lovely observations. My only quibble is with the phrase "when we spring to our knees at the end of the day..." It's a cute pun, but I can't visualize that action; I don't think "spring" is the right verb.

Well-written devotional.
12/11/05
Peaceful. Thank you for sharing your testamony. You made some very nice points. God bless you, littlelight