The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/05
Good encouragement. Third stanza has an extra syllable or two? Wonder how this relates to the season of spring.
12/05/05
Your poem has some lovely sentiments. Work on more consistent meter, for a poem that really "sings."
Micely written but it did not seem to be about the season of spring.
12/07/05
I think even in a Spring full of drought, the title lets us understand that Jesus is the Spring of Living water. I agree with Jan again. Thank you for sharing. God bless ya, littlelight