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11/20/14
Excellent! This was an amazingly clean and precise read that kept me interested all the way to the powerful ending!

Great writing, and great message!

Superbly done.

God bless~
Minor thing first. I think I would have had "to teach English".

Well written situation.

What comes to my mind is, how would I react to someone if being forced to deny my Christian faith. Would I stand firm and not deny Jesus as Lord and Christ.It could be "life or death" here on earth but in death it might mean life.

Keep writing to strengthen our faith.
11/21/14
That was good! It had me captivated all the way through.
11/26/14
This was great! You were so convincing in your descriptions, I was sure it was non-fiction when I began reading. When I got to the end, I really WANTED it to be non-fiction!!! To witness the powerful workings of God in such a life-saving way would be, wow... And of course, God does work like that, especially in third-world and Christian-persecuting countries.I really like this story.
11/28/14
Congrats!
God bless~