The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/05
Well-written! Truth and emotion woven into a tight package. God bless.
02/10/05
Good story. Some dialogue might have made it more dramatic.
Very nice! I like how you illustrated the only time it is alright for us to go against the authority structures in our lives, if they are asking us to go against God. God bless,
02/13/05
This is a very good story. Let us all follow Jesus at any cost.
So well done. Vivid, beautiful writing. My heart went out to Fatimah and the many who would truly have to abandon all they love to follow Christ.
02/16/05
wonderfully written, life breathed into your charectors, and a story too often true. well done..
02/16/05
Karen, Congratulations on your 3rd Place in the Level 1 Champion Challenge, AND 5th Place in the Editors' Choice awards. That means your story will be going into our next book (don't forget to send your signed release into FaithWriters). With a win like that, it's time for you to move up to the Intermediate Level for future Challenges. With love, Deb (Challenge Co-ordinator)