The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/14
Wow - Your entry could have been entered in the suspense topic too! I was quite nervous reading the MC's account.

Well done, and thrilled for a "happy ending." God and His wisdom came to her rescue.

Great jo with this.

God bless
11/08/14
What a drama! Good job keeping the tension and suspense at the boiling point throughout this "flash fiction". Keep writing!
11/10/14
Really good!those great descriptions had me there with her in the car, I was tense reading it. Praise God for the happy ending -her surge of empowerment began the victory.
11/13/14
Congrats!
This was such an amazing story!

God bless~