The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/14
Always interesting to read a story about another culture. Good job...perhaps a few words about the visitor's appearance would paint a clearer picture in the reader's mind - since she is really the only other character participating in the story. Thank you for your entry!
10/17/14
Very descriptive, you could really feel you were there. It was also a good display of love and grace.
10/17/14
Cultural clashes can be lots of fun when treated in the right spirit. You've touched on this, but a few more descriptions would bring us into the scene just a little more.
10/18/14
Interesting read that was descriptive and well done.

God bless~