The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/05
I like this a lot; it's one of the better object lessons on this topic. It will be easier on your readers' eyes if you put blank spaces between paragraphs. Lovingly written, thanks!
11/30/05
This is a really good illustration, and I love how you brought it full-circle: mentioning your own re-dedication and the trailblazing aspect at the end again really tied it all together. Great job!
11/30/05
Amen. Lovely story, descriptive, and the way you tied it all together. I enjoyed reading it. God bless ya, littlelight
04/24/06
The "Title" lured me in - and I loved the message. Separating the paragraphs would have been an easier read - but I'm sure you've already learned that by now. AND I would have loved to see the TITLE, "Prune Away, Lord"...as the last words in the article (just my personal opinion). Nice job!