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09/18/14
Your paraphrase brought the well-known Psalm to life again. I had a bit of hard time finding a "rhythm" to the stanzas.
09/19/14
Your love for the Lord is palpable in your tender words.

I found it a beautiful homage to our Lord and it touched my heart.

Well done.

God bless~
09/20/14
This might make an interesting gospel "rap" to be read aloud to a group, since it is such a personal piece, and worth sharing as a testimony.
A person feels closer to God when we apply bible scripture to ourselves. Good work doing this. The verses can live within you now.

Good application.

For my ease of reading, I like the lines of verse to all be about the same although this does not mean "they have to be the same".
A lovely retelling . . .

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1 Peter 3:15 - But sanctify the Lord God in your hearts: and [be] ready always to [give] an answer to every man that asketh you a reason of the hope that is in you with meekness and fear:

Hugs and prayers, Judi
This is a beautiful, yet personal rendition of the 23 Psalm. Congratulations on ranking 8th in your level. Happy Dance!