The Official Writing Challenge
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11/28/05
This article is rich with good spiritual meat upon which to chew. Paragraphs 2 and 3 contain excellent observations. Watch out for repeating words within the same paragraph, as the use of "quaint" in P.1. The final line of your article is one to keep close to heart. Thanks for your insight!
11/30/05
I liked the looking with the spirit--and not with the eyes. So, that leads the reader to examine it a little closer with you. Nice examples too. God bless ya, littlelight
Loved the message. Lots of descriptive words helped paint the picture beautifully. Yes, avoid the use of the same descriptive word so close together. God Bless.
12/01/05
I thought this was very nicely done! I liked the spelling of sonshine. Great work!