The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/05
This story was pretty well done. Would have like to have had some type of reflection on how the Bible came to be there to begin with. I was kind of in the dark about that. Nice work. God bless ya, littlelight
12/01/05
I'm not sure I understand this story, but you caught my interest from the very beginning! Keep writing from the heart.
12/02/05
I was immediately drawn into the struggle to get to the hiding place in the castle wall. Good description. I wondered what happened that the castle had been abandoned. So many questions came into my mind. Who was the narrator and what role did he play in the past of the castle? Why could he not return? Wondered if this would be part of a longer work. The end was somewhat predictable, that he was seeking a Bible he had hidden. But the reason he hid it was not so clear. This story has mysteries that leave me wanting answers.
There was a lot of drama. How did the Bible get in the vines? A little unclear, but good suspense