The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/14
Aww...touching. This pulled me in right away, loved the ending.

God bless~
The ending is crucial to make this story work. What if the door bell had not rung?

When the door bell does not ring, the "cons" side grows.

As a retired school teacher it is the kids who suffer as it seems all the parent has to do is find the next person to marry and the past is the past. It is not so with the children. The past is still the present with them.

The story is well written. The question is: does it help solve a problem?
08/26/14
That was touching. I thought it was a good use of the topic that also threw light on prevalent issues like broken families.
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