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I would like to suggest that you read the areas the judges will look at to judge your work.
It was very helpful to me.
You need a "Hook" to draw us into the purpose of your writing and keep us reading.
You were on topic.
Break up your paragraphs.
Use more descriptive wording to make it alive. Show not tell.
Hope this helps.
Keep writing.
God bless.