The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/05
So many great words in a small package. I enjoyed reading your story. If this was embellished on a little more--wow! I liked your take on the story. God bless ya, littlelight
11/30/05
Tight and strong retelling. Thanks for posting.
12/01/05
Wow! I'm at a loss for words to describe how I feel after reading that! Thank-you!
12/02/05
One of the most power-packed paragraphs I have ever read! Great job!