The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/05
Beautiful. I wanted to cry. Very touching. God bless ya, littlelight
11/30/05
Sorry, but I'm missing something here - I don't get what you're saying. But other than that, you've chosen some very lyrical words and created some beautiful phrases.
12/02/05
The poetic expressions you have chosen are truly beautiful!

I was a little lost in this poem, however. Mixing some clarifying lines in on this poem would help.

Thanks for sharing this poem, it sounds like it has a very deep personal meaning to you.