The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/05
Amen. Good commentary. Thank you for sharing with us. God bless ya, littlelight
11/30/05
Amen. Good devotional.
12/01/05
I have read a few articles that take John 15:5 as their Scripture text, but adding the statements about your feelings at times in your life personalizes your article. I liked that touch.
A few thoughts: P. 1 The Lord is the vine, not us, and we are the branches extending from Him. I think (?) you meant that, but it didn't come out that way.
We get our equipping from the vine Jesus Christ and His Holy Spirit. The third and fourth paragraphs after the Scripture text contain good meditations. Your last sentence is a good conclusion, but again I would want my *branch* to be strongly connected to the *vine* Jesus. Feel free to send me a PM if you disagree. Otherwise this is very good! BTW, I'm glad you returned to the Lord! He has a purpose for giving you a writing talent. Keep on writing!
12/02/05
I definitely agree with Sandra's comment, that would be my only suggestion. Good job with this heart-felt message.