The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/14
This was spectacularly soothing and beautiful.

Excellent job!

God bless~
You did a lot of work on the words chosen and the length of the lines of the message you wrote. This takes time.

You may have some readers that will question another message or word from God (Jesus).

Jesus came as the light to the world. There is no other light needed except what he brought.

Jesus' death (sacrifice) brought all the hope for heaven we need. Our hope depends on our obedience to his gospel and being faithful till death because of that sacrifice. Isn't his free gift wonderful.

Keep writing and keep your heart in heaven and your eyes in his word.
07/25/14
Beautifully-chosen phrases and very nice descriptions. Keep up the good work.
07/25/14
Wonderful writing. Thanks for sharing.
07/29/14
Beautiful, wonderful and a bit familiar. I love the "Two hearts beating as one" line. I used the same in an expository article, and it is so fitting for the love relationship we share with our glorious Lord. Great work!
This is beautiful. You have a wonderful way of arranging the words. I loved this phrase: liquefied love
and palpable purity. Congratulations on your ranking.