The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/05
This was really such a beautiful memoir and dedication. Makes me cry..God bless ya, littlelight
12/01/05
That was beautifully written! Thank-you for sharing! It warmed my heart!
12/02/05
This may not be the kind of critique you had in mind, or maybe it was.Overall your entry was easy to read, and held my attention. There was a good flow.But most importantly, your entry touched my heart and encouraged me to remember that my life is a example- whether good or bad-still and example. Thanks for sharing.
12/03/05
It takes a well written piece to give me goose bumps. Yours did just that. Thank you for sharing that story with all of us. Touching your readers' hearts is every writer's dream. And as my granddaughter (who is only 2) always says, "You did it!)
01/15/06
Absolutely beautiful! Such a lovely way to describe a person, and such a wonderful lesson to learn. Your writing is perfection - you need to move up a peg or two; loved this piece and it touched my heart. That's the goal of every writer - and you succeeded. Thank you
09/29/06
You really have a gift for writing beautiful tributes. And, we are blessed to be able to read about these people who have touched your life.