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06/05/14
This was compelling and had my attention all the way through. Thank you for sharing your story.

Your closing made the most prolific statement comepleting the story in a powerful way.

Well done.

God bless~
06/05/14
I feel your pain here!
John 15:18-19.

Very well written!
06/06/14
Wonderful job. I have found myself in that position many times. You expressed very well the impatience we all experience waiting for God's answer. My Timex can't com pair to to his Rolex.
06/09/14
This is a good testimony/devotional, rolled into one piece.

A couple of suggestions: Put some space between paragraphs. It will flow better. And watch your tenses. You changed from past-tense to present-tense a couple of different times, sometimes within the same sentence.

Those are minor and easy to fix and they do not take away from the fact that you have an excellent piece of writing here with a good message and a personal touch that adds authenticity to your story.

Great job!
06/13/14
Congratulations!

God bless~