The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/14
Clever! I loved the segue into the biblical scriptures. I really thought this was a creative entry.
WEll done!

God bless~
06/05/14
I loved the expression in the dialogue and the point about how we are all called to "play Jesus".

On a technical note, in the paragraph that begins, "Tony started to walk away" consider putting each of the verbs that follow in past tense.
06/06/14
How true in each of our lives. We all seem to want to play a different roll sometime or other. Living a life with Jesus being the main character in us will make us all stars. I enjoyed it. I look forward to reading more of your writings.
06/06/14
Pretty cool. Love your story.
06/09/14
Very interesting approach to the topic. Having been on both sides of this equation (as an actor and a director), I can tell you that you nailed the issues of dealing with a disgruntled cast member perfectly. Except that I would never take a vote from the crew on an issue of casting. A whole new can of worms gets opened with that decision.

There were some language issues (some tenses got switched mid-sentence and some words that were incorrect), but the overall writing was good and the dialogue was excellent. Best of all you captured a unique personality for each of your characters.

Good work!
An interesting article. I enjoyed it. I did find it to be a bit confusing at times to follow. Overall, a quałiity article.

God Bless!
06/13/14
Congratulations!

God bless~