The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/14
Great job with the topic...and Amen, there is no friend like Jesus!

God bless~
This is a nice testimony. You make some great points about what a best friend is. Of course no one can love us like Jesus does.

I'm guessing that there will be a lot of stories about Jesus being a bestie this week. It's important to present it with something that will stand out and is different than the other stories. Sometimes you can try a different POV or voice if you feel God is calling you to write that story. I noticed you repeated quite a few words in different paragraphs. Try restructuring the sentences or using a synonym.

I definitely could feel the passion in your voice as you described your relationship with God. There is nothing else like the way he loves us and that comes through loud and clear in your piece. Nice job.
05/30/14
There is no friend so faithful as Jesus is. He is our perfect model of how to be a friend to others. Thank you for this well covered review of friendship. You did a good job of testifying of Jesus friendship.

It might help the reader some, if you were to cite specific examples of what a friend did that was not friend-like and then paint us a word picture so we can envision how it affected you and made you feel.

Keep up the good work!
I liked your thoughts about loving Jesus. Many people can have a knowledge about Jesus and tell facts about him but it is only when people have a love for him that he will make a difference in their lives.

It is when we love him and recognize him as Lord of our lives that we will begin to keep his commands. The first thing we will do is to be baptized for the forgiveness of our sin. When this is done God gives us his Holy Spirit to live within us. This is why we can call God our heavenly Father since we have his Spirit within us.

I also liked how you discussed the many aspects of friends and friendship. As our friend, Jesus would never ask us to do anything that he wouldn't do himself.
This is the best of the best in the Beginner group! A first place article for sure! Keep up the great work my friend. God will use your talent to its best!