The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/14
I enjoyed your approach and take with the familiar Biblical story. Great detail and it flowed well.

Good job!

God bless~
05/24/14
Well done. I like this. I like the viewpoint, and the way you handled it. It was to topic.

Keep writing, and may the Lord bless.

Thanks for this - Trudy
05/28/14
These were certainly some facepalm moments in Israel's history! I think you nailed the topic best of those I've read so far. You held my attention well, and I enjoyed the story. Keep up the great work!
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