The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/14
Great imagination!

I loved your entry. It always makes me smile when I read stories, it fascinates me because we're all writers, and we all have different sides to present in stories. This was well done, and I really enjoyed the intensity and your approach to the topic.

Great job!

God bless~
05/20/14
Oh, wow....what a good blurb for the back of a novel! This could easily be made into a much longer story.
It is many times the one who has done nothing that get caught suffering from the gossip.

You showed this nicely.

The article was easy to read and has some tense moments because of the "mystery" connected to the gossip.

I liked what you did.